this is a new dool fanfic and it's how Stefano first met and fell in love with Dianna.
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Prolouge: It was on a cold day in the midwesterntown of Salem USA. When Stefano was at his favorite Bar having a one of his favorite drinks, When He saw a woman sitting by herself in a booth in the corner of the Bar. She was the most beautiful person, he'd ever seen before. Stefano decided to go over and see if he could talk to her. He looked around, just to see if no-one was watching him, he got up from his seat with his favorite drink in hand and walked over to the beautiful woman sitting by herself in the booth in the corner of the bar.
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Int. Booth in the corner of the bar.





Stefano; Hello, may i sit here?,



The Beautiful Woman: Oh, Yes,




Stefano: Thank You, (he sits down across from her




The Beautiful Woman: Your Welcome
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To Be Contuied.

Is Dianna blonde, brunette or a red head? What was Stefano drinking? Enquiring minds want to know!

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I'm with you, QC! I want more details. does stefano limp? what is his favorite drink? (Shirley Temple, maybe?)were they in college when they met? or were they married to others and cheating? I left her a "help" list in one of her other threads. think she'll read it?

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I think I agree with everyone else. Further development of this story is needed. When giving an intro to a story, You may want to provide more of a descriptive setting, maybe a lil background info, etc. Get the reader hooked, and therefore, leave them wanting more.

But hell, what do I know? I am no English major, by any means. But I do know what I like to see in a good story.

Later much.

I'm Still Thinking About It.

No, He Doesn't And For Your Info He's Having A Lite Martini.

Here's the second part.
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Stefano is still at the bar while drinking his lite martini and is talking to the beautiful woman.
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Int. The Booth In The Corner Of The Bar.






Stefano: So, what's your name?.




The Beautiful Woman: I'm Dianna Brier.





Stefano: wow, that's a pretty name.




Dianna: Thanks, what's yours?.




Stefano: I'm Stefano.





Dianna: I like your name too, it's so cute.




Stefano: Thanks, Miss Brier.




Dianna: Oh please call me, Dianna.




Stefano: Ok, Dianna.
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Stefano looks at Dianna. and She looks back at Stefano. he took her out of the bar and put her in his Limo and drove her to her house, when they got to Dianna's house, Stefano walked her up to her front porch of her house.
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Out. Front Porch Of Dianna's House.




Dianna: Well, Stefano, thanks for taking me home.




Stefano: Oh it's been my pleasure, Dianna.




Dianna: Well, I better go in my house.



Stefano: Dianna, do you want to have dinner with me at my mansion?.




Dianna: Oh, I'd Love Too, Stefano.




Stefano: Oh Good, I'll have my limo pick you up around 7:00?.



Dianna: That'll Be Fine.



Stefano: Well, Good-Bye, Dianna, I'll See You Soon.



Dianna: Bye, Stefano.
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Stefano went back in his limo and Dianna went inside her house. and She started thinking about Stefano. while Stefano was starting to think about Dianna.
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To Be Contuied.

you keep snapping at me so I'm not going to help you anymore.

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wow..was that really necessary? She was just trying to help you. Apparently, you don't want constructive criticism. Eh..to each his/her own.


Aww Bunny. At least you tried!! You're still the best in my book!

awww, thanks! now I'm blushing!

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